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Of Death and Broken Promises by ~dragongirl240:icondragongirl240:



I watched as my sister fought her final battle.She fought like a cornered wildcat or should I say a cornered wolf.I wanted to help my sister.I wanted so desperatly to jump into the fight and protect my sister from her adversary,to stop this all from happening.It took every bit of will power I had to do as my sister requested and stay on the side lines.
I didn't want to sit back and watch,I wanted to fight with my twin.After all we always did everything together.Even fight.I stared at the ground trying to decide if it would be wiser to do as my sister told me or to just screw it all and save her.It took me all of five seconds to decide,that I would save my twin.I looked up,ready to jump into the battle and help my sister.But by then it was to late.

Chase Young was sitting on top of my sister,pinning her down.I tried to run to my sister but someone held me back.I think it was Blackhawk, but I'm not sure.I wasn't really paying attention.I was screaming and clawing at the hands keeping me from my sister.Chase's fist shot forward.A direct hit.The hands released me and I rushed forward,my comrades at my heels.

I reached my sister first.I fell to my knees beside her.She was white and she wasn't breathing.I tried to think of something I could do,anything that would help her.I couldn't think of anything that would bring her back.By now my comrades had crowded around me and my sister.I fought back the tears that threatened to overflow.I couldn't hold them back .I started to sob.I had just lost my other half...my best friend...my twin.You promised me...you promised not to leave me.We were supposed to be together forever.Remember sis...Artimis...sis.You promised!I clutched my sister's body to my chest still sobbing brokenly.I didn't care what anyone else thought.


That was a week ago.Now I'm standing infront of my sister's coffin looking down at her pale face.I'm crying again,but I can't help it.As I look at my twin the tears streaming down my face,I whisper two final words to her "You promised."
©2007-2009 ~dragongirl240
:icondragongirl240:

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this is about Apollo and how he reacts to Artimis's death

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:iconanimatedg1:
oh so sad.And ironic I read this on the day of my cousin's funeral.And don't say your sorry for this, don't,it actually cheered me up a little.

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Licking doorknobs is illegal in other countries.~spongebob squarepants
:icondragongirl240:
oh well glad that u commented on all of my wrk and extra glad i cheered you up when u were sad

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DeiDei :heart: Danna forever

DeiDei=DG240
Danna=Sexyorochimaru
:iconanimatedg1:
Thanks ;)

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Licking doorknobs is illegal in other countries.~spongebob squarepants
:iconpanther420:
hey my name is chase...anywho pretty intersting read allthough u might want to put this as a piece of prose and not a poem ..just a minor observation im not quite sure how sister died and exactly what became of her killer..anywho good stuff I know i was writing like that when i was 13

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"If ignorance is bliss, is it folly to be wise?"
:icondragongirl240:
Magic killed the sister who's nam is artimis this is told from her brother apollo's pov and Chase Young killed her check out my gallery for more info

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DeiDei :heart: Danna forever

DeiDei=DG240
Danna=Sexyorochimaru
:icondragongirl240:
np

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DeiDei :heart: Danna forever

DeiDei=DG240
Danna=Sexyorochimaru
:iconfukaimorimidori:
I've been meaning to take a look at your gallery for some time. But could you paragraph this and double space it? It's a little of a pain to read... ^^;

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:blackrose: Words have weight,
something once said cannot be unsaid;
meaning is like a stone dropped into a pool;
the ripples will spread and you cannot know what bank they wash against. :blackrose:
:icondragongirl240:
mkay i'll do that

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DeiDei :heart: Danna forever

DeiDei=DG240
Danna=Sexyorochimaru
:iconfukaimorimidori:
But otherwise it's great. :)

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:blackrose: Words have weight,
something once said cannot be unsaid;
meaning is like a stone dropped into a pool;
the ripples will spread and you cannot know what bank they wash against. :blackrose:

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